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Problem 19 - Entrance Test

The following sentence contains an example of allusion. Choose the best revision to eliminate the allusion. "Their love was a Romeo and Juliet story, destined to end in tragedy." The best revision is

Correct: A

The original sentence contains an example of allusion, as it references the famous story of Romeo and Juliet to convey the idea that the couple's love is destined to end in tragedy. The best revision to eliminate the allusion is choice A, which replaces the reference to Romeo and Juliet with a more literal and descriptive phrase. This revision maintains the original meaning of the sentence while avoiding the allusion. Choice B is incorrect, as it changes the tone of the sentence to be more positive and optimistic. Choice C is incorrect, as it is still somewhat allusive and suggests a brief and intense romance. Choice D is incorrect, as it changes the tone of the sentence to be more exciting and adventurous.